I am not sure I agree with you, I think it is wonderfully complex - the bright area providing a kind of sensory lay-by before the switchback ride.
You know, you should exhibit this sequence, when it's finalised. At the very least, consider making a Blurb book.
You chose escalators that don't, in fact, intersect. They run in parallel.
A quiet white space is lovely thing, God wot.
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